Friday, January 13, 2012

Best friends or enimies?????

              Hi my name is Ali short for Alissa.Most people call me Alissa when they want something but other than that it’s Ali.I am fourteen a freshman in high school  I have brown hair and blue eyes. My mom and dad are divorced and I am an only child. I am on the bus on way to school and I hear the snickering of other children in the background,Probably laughing at something inappropriate. It’s now 7:15 the bell rang and I had my books in my hand some girls knocked them out my hands I really don't know if it was an accident but whoever did it now I'm embarrassed. That day early in the morning my teachers all met me I was the new girl no one ever likes the new girls. So all my teachers met me and then they began telling me how much their jobs meant to them wait a minute I don't even care about their jobs not even a little. So that day I met a few people I sat with them at lunch and then they asked me if I wanted to skip class with them I looked at them like they were little phycos which they probably were So I said no only because I didn't wanna get into trouble on my first day I wouldn't wanna skip a class for anything.Especially if they get detention I wouldn't wanna be stuck with nothing to do in there my friends always told me it was like a jail cell but I don't believe it.

 Once I got home my mom asked me what happened in school today of course like any other kid i said nothing and went straight to my room I was upset about everything even in school no friends if i had to make friends it would be the bad kids that skip class I don't want friends like that I want good friends like in middle school I'm not in middle school anymore nothing will make me change not even one bit. My mood was sad just plain old sad the sad that makes you feel crappy the one that brings your days down and kicks you right in the butt later on in life.My life is somewhat miserable just thinking about the fact that i moved all the way from California  to Florida which they call a sunshine state? Is it really sunshine or is it just rain all the time? Anyways now I'm in math class and a student was talking about me and how ugly I am I mean They shouldn't be talking about me just look at them.I feel hated in this school maybe i should just run away from everything and everyone I wish for my family like my mom and dad to get along and I just miss everybody. English class Hi I'm Alissa I said to the teacher and she introduced me to the class I heard mumbling and all i heard was who is that chick why is she in our school can i help you stop looking at me I was devastated didn't know what to do and I felt sick to my stomach I was home sick wanting to go home had no idea what to do should i text my mom and tell her to bring me home So i did I was very upset so this is what i said to her Mom can i please go home i don't wanna be in school she replied why people are being so mean i don't like it here not even a little girls cause too much drama and I HATE IT. I bursted into tears asking to use the bathroom so i can get out of school made my day really hard why do people have to be like this. On my way home I realized that my mom did not want to pick me up and i told her what happened after that she was like oh why aren't you like them other kids that punch people in their face I told her what makes you think i should do that It will get me in so much trouble nice advice MOM.

      Once we got home mom told me to do my homework the school called and said that I made fun of some girl that i dont even know wait yes i do shes in my math class and she slapped the books out my hands on the first day of school I knew who she was she just didn't like me and that day i was grounded because of her because of that little I couldn't finish the words that were about to come out of my mouth I was furious I couldnt wait to find her name out..... Next day of school it was tuesday thank you lord 3 more days till the weekend I definitely couldn't wait.In school during math the same girl gave me looks and laughed with her friend looking at me i knew they were talking about me their little devil eyes beaming toward me gave me the heart beating of a life time.I bit my tongue it tasted like metal.I was pissed off and i wanted to rip her head off and throw it so she cant find it.I asked my math partner what her name is and he said her name is Valarie and my eyes opened and grew bigger and bigger as if i were a cat hunting her prey down. Ali what is this equalled to said my math teacher um um i don't know Valarie started to chuckle and she said this in exact words: see she came from a different town she doesn't know nothing and shes stupid I said this: If I'm so stupid then how come I have higher grades then you the teacher sent us both to the principles office and we both sat there gleaming at each other for at least five minutes.

 Then I spoke Valarie why do you hate me so much? I said she replied : Remember me the girl that you said no to skipping class with well that's me and i kinda thought that you wouldn't wanna be my friend so i started talking crap about you and im really sorry because i knew how much it hurts you now I saw you cry and i was upset i don't like people crying because of me. I told her that i didn't wanna skip because it was my first day of class and then you seemed upset i cant skip because if i do my mom will ground me and i don't want that to happen maybe me and you can hang out sometime?Yeah we should said Valarie.Well I think we really should. Principal walks in hey guys what are you guys doing down here us um we got into an argument but we settled it and now were friends right Ali yup were officially friends principal: good for you guys now you guys can get back to class.OK so on our way to class we see this bird type thingy fly near the window so we tried to touch it and it got away i was laughing so hard a teacher came out and told us to be quiet.Ever since that day Ali and Valarie were best friends.They hung out and always looked out for each other No matter what they did everything together except use the bathroom of course when Ali had a sleepover Valarie was invited.What kind of friend do you have?????Who will you meet?


                                             A short story by Brianna Gracey


  1. I would like all people to get the fact that bullying is not right.
    I think my whole story was easy to write because I kept adding my ideas to my story.
    I thought that the setting was pretty hard because I had no idea where my character might be.
    How is my story??????????

  2. 1:) the conflict of the story was alissa was being bullied her first year of high school.the conflict was external.
    2:) the main character changed over time because she began to not care about the people who bullied her and have a more positive attitude. this makes the story different because it tells people that to not let people bring you down.
    3:) my favorite part of the story was when she finally was not bullied any more and she was happy.
    4:) the theme of the story would be to stand up for yourself.
    5:) if you were to revise this i would focus on spelling and making sure you have good rich paragraphs.