There are many values and costs that we have here in this world. Some
people value their dogs and some people value the people that they love.
Well me I value many ,many things like my Nintendo d.s and fall. I love
both things but value my Nintendo D.S. and Fall is very priceless.
My Nintendo D.S. sits in a case on my bureau just seeing it makes me
anxious to play. It’s wireless, handheld, and doubled screened. I play
in my room on my bed right next to my ladybug pillow pet my pillow
pet.My pillow pet is red with black dots and its huge!I lay on it when I
play my favorite game Mario brothers the best game in the world.When I
play my game on my D.S. During the winter I play when I am bored and
don't wanna go outside in the snow.Once I get home iIwant to play with
it but I cant until I have my homework done which it takes about and
hour or so depending on the day.Sometimes I wonder what would I ever do
without my Nintendo D.S.
I love my Nintendo D.S. so much I don't really know what I would
ever do without it.It makes me feel better when I'm sad or even when I'm
happy I really wish we could take our D.S. to school and I would love
to play with it but we cant its okay maybe when I get home I'm going to
play with it.
I feel the leaves crunch on my bare feet and laughter of children as
they jump into leaf piles.It’s fall the season of pumpkin patches and
Halloween! I can show you all about fall but I would rather tell you.
Many many times I jumped into leaf piles with my younger cousin which is
only 8 years old now in the fall I rake up all the leafs from my back
yard and everyone from my neighborhood jumps into it. My cousin he is
very playful at times especially in the fall I always come outside in
fall I do love other seasons but by far fall is my favorite. My
neighbors on the other hand are very nice and love to jump in leaf
piles. I wish everybody could have as much fun as me in the....FALL!
I have many thoughts about the things that are valuable to me and the
costs but I will never ever forget the best thing of all which is fall.
I love fall because of the joy that it brings not only to me but the
people in my neighborhood this is why I love fall.
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ReplyDelete1. The author values her Nintendo D.S. and the season Fall.
ReplyDelete2. She describes her Pillow pet well, her Nintendo D.S. well, and the season fall well and what she likes to do during the fall.
3.The strengths of the story are that she describes the scene of Fall very well.
4. I would tell the author to go back over the story and make sure there are no typos and mistakes. Because as I was reading I saw some mistakes myself.